day tripper

Hai! Your avitar is what my friends and I call McWeeze [inside joke]. Haha d: All right well, I find this to be... well, how should I say this. I ...

Molto Grazie, bella!

I really liked the part where you say that Nichole wishes that her mum would come back to her and do all those things she used. That was the part ...

Haha(: Okay. And yay thank you! I really liked your idea.

* The introduction and chapter one were originally one but I felt it better to split it into two. Focusing on the bright lights above her head, Nichole blinked at ...

I see why this is your "Baby". You really seemed to convey loads of meaning and thoughts into not very much space. Hahaha, same! :D That's where I got it. ...

HAI! Welcome to YWS! :smt039 Glad to be yer first review :D I'm very active on the site so if you ever have a question, feel free to PM me;D ...

Thank you so much, Lucy! Also, I just had something to say to one thing that you've both pointed out: Drinking driving does occur. Nichole can't drive, she only has ...

:smt039 I suicided once. Do you mean I attempted suicide once? But, you know, I managed, like we all do, and things began to come together, and I got a ...

:smt039 All of the emotions, Mixed into one. Yay for great openings! Mementos of thought, And the sadness of loss. Eh.... not a big fan of this. Like the cement ...

Thank you(: It's supposed to be short since it's an introduction. The chapters will become much longer; I promise!

Edited! Thank you, Ashley!

I AM BACK. Haha. Why did he send me here? Frustration and uncertainty filled my every bone. Is it some kind of test? I think the questions should be in ...

So, I am still continuing my other story. Right now, though, this is a book that I wrote two years ago. Still to this date it was my best idea ...

LUCY STARTED A NEW STORY?! MAN WHERE HAVE I BEEN. Oh yeah, up at the mountains where I receive no internet or cell phone reception. |: :smt039 So here's the ...